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Date: 27 Jun 2008 16:14:00
From: GalaxyMan
Subject: Why We Leave The 10 Pin In Bowling.
The 10 Pin In Bowling - Why We Leave The 10 Pin In Bowling.
First there are different 2 types of 10 pins.

Learning to recognize the type of 10 you are leaving.
Then learning how to adjust is the key to increasing pin carry and a
higher scoring potential will occur in return.

- a Informational and interesting subject -
http://bowlingballgalaxy.com/the-10-pin-bowling/index.html




 
Date: 29 Jun 2008 19:32:09
From: GalaxyMan
Subject: Re: Why We Leave The 10 Pin In Bowling.
On Jun 29, 1:09=A0am, PromptJock <102151.3...@compuserve.com > wrote:
> > Ok I have redone my - Why We Leave the 10 pin site -http://bowlingballga=
laxy.com/the-10-pin-bowling/index.html
> > also I am going rechecking my other articles too.
>
> Almost there. =A0Change the "hip hop" references (a.k.a. "rap") to
> "covering a Chirstmas present" references (a.k.a. "wrap") and you'll
> be all set. :)
>
> Again, thanks for not being mad, etc. with my critique and keep the
> information coming... :)


OK I have change the rap to wrap in this articles.
http://bowlingballgalaxy.com/the-10-pin-bowling/index.html
I hope I got them all?

Now I have redone this one but not the side pages. It is on bowling
hand positions, something I use alot in my bowling game. -
http://bowlingballgalaxy.com/hand-positions/in-bowling.html


 
Date: 28 Jun 2008 23:09:42
From: PromptJock
Subject: Re: Why We Leave The 10 Pin In Bowling.
> Ok I have redone my - Why We Leave the 10 pin site - http://bowlingballgalaxy.com/the-10-pin-bowling/index.html
> also I am going rechecking my other articles too.

Almost there. Change the "hip hop" references (a.k.a. "rap") to
"covering a Chirstmas present" references (a.k.a. "wrap") and you'll
be all set. :)

Again, thanks for not being mad, etc. with my critique and keep the
information coming... :)


 
Date: 28 Jun 2008 20:14:38
From: GalaxyMan
Subject: Re: Why We Leave The 10 Pin In Bowling.
On Jun 27, 8:54=A0pm, PromptJock <102151.3...@compuserve.com > wrote:
> > The 10 Pin In Bowling - Why We Leave The 10 Pin In Bowling.
>
> A decent explanation of the phenomenon. =A0However, it would be better
> reading (and therefore, more "credible") if all the grammar and
> homonym errors were corrected.
>
> Your previous articles, while also valuable in their content, also
> suffer from similar grammar and homonym errors.
>
> And before you get upset with me, I'm more than willing to take your
> work and make all the necessary grammatical, etc. corrections. :)
>
> Otherwise, keep the information coming. :)



Ok I have redone my - Why We Leave the 10 pin site -
http://bowlingballgalaxy.com/the-10-pin-bowling/index.html
also I am going rechecking my other articles too.



 
Date: 27 Jun 2008 18:54:40
From: PromptJock
Subject: Re: Why We Leave The 10 Pin In Bowling.
> The 10 Pin In Bowling - Why We Leave The 10 Pin In Bowling.

A decent explanation of the phenomenon. However, it would be better
reading (and therefore, more "credible") if all the grammar and
homonym errors were corrected.

Your previous articles, while also valuable in their content, also
suffer from similar grammar and homonym errors.

And before you get upset with me, I'm more than willing to take your
work and make all the necessary grammatical, etc. corrections. :)

Otherwise, keep the information coming. :)